Write Links’ first Professional Development session for 2020 got off to a sizzling start and was kept short and sweet, keeping with the stamina of the short story. Mia Macrossan shared sensational take home tips for writing the short story for children and insight into what the judges are looking for.
Tuck Shop Takeover by Combat Dad, written by Debbie Smith and winner of the 2018 StoryLinks Short Story Competition was used as a sample writing piece to help demonstrate Mia’s tips.
#10 Top Tips
1. Do enter competitions because they
Writing in poetic form, whether it be rhyme or free verse, can be more difficult than a traditional narrative structure. There are many benefits to writing in verse. The key points that were discussed were that writing in verse slows down the words so they are not lost in quantity, but rather the quality amplifies the emotion being conveyed.
Then Kathryn put our writing muscles to the test! She demonstrated a range of different poetic styles, how she used them, how to write them, then gave us challenges for us to use our creativity and a lot of muscle power to write in each style. We explored Didactic Cinquians (only 11 words long!); Haikus (only 3 lines with less than 17 syllables); Solages (for a joke) and Zentangle Poems as a form of Erasure Poetry (using a pre-existing text, finding a free verse poem within, then creating zentangle designs to emphasize the poem by disguising the unused text).
For more information about Kathryn Apel and her collection of books, check out: https://katswhiskers.wordpress.com/
For more information about The Queensland Writers Centre, see: https://qldwriters.org.au/
Photography by Maria Parenti-Baldey and KRC Photography.
KR Clarry is an OP1 graduate of Logan and a Teacher of 14 years’ experience with a strong passion for life long learning. She has taught in State, Catholic and Independent schools as well as having roles with a University and an International Education Company delivering ICT professional development to school administrators, staff and students.
KR loves to read, write and bring stories alive through modelled and shared reading and writing experiences. She is currently working on many exciting projects.
When she isn’t lost in a world of creative imagination, KR likes to do ballroom dancing, bush walking and photography, as well as volunteering for a range of different community charities.
KR’s ultimate goal is to make a positive difference in the world and works to inspire children to aim high to be the best versions of themselves that they can be.
Photograph by Special Memories Photography.
East bank of the river:
Saturday morning, Bryon the bear woke with a dream. Winter was on its way and he needed the perfect hibernation hut. The island in the middle of the river was the perfect spot. He had logs, mud, and wifi all ready to go.
West bank of the river:
Saturday morning, Florence the fish woke with a daring idea. The island in the middle of the river was the perfect place for her 15 metre diving board. Florence could do a double half-pike backwards somersault and not even make a splash. She had logs, mud and sunscreen all ready to go.
To the island they went.
On the east side of the island, the bear started to build.
On the west side of the island the fish started to build.
‘This is going to be the most comfortable hibernation spot ever,’ said Byron while he worked.
‘This is going to be the tallest diving board in the country,’ said Florence while she worked.
They were both so buy building, hammering, drilling and designing, that they didn’t even notice one another.
They didn’t even notice Charles the cat from the City Council, standing right between them, holding a very legal looking piece of paper and shaking his head.
‘Do you have a permit?’ he asked the bear and the fish.
‘I don’t need a permit to hibernate,’ said Byron.
‘I don’t need a permit to dive,’ said Florence.
‘Unless you have a permit to build,’ said Charles, ‘I’m afraid you are going to have to tear all of this down.’
Florence looked at Byron.
Byron looked at Florence.
‘Did you know?’ said Byron… ‘That cats can’t swim?’ said Florence.
The island in the middle of the river, is now home to one Olympic quality diving board, a sleeping bear – and excellent wifi.
JM Wisbey writes funny things for children, and for her own amusement. She doesn’t want to die one day with all of these ideas still stuck in her head.
Bear was sick of living on the island.
"I am destined to be on Broadway," he declared, "not stuck here with only you for company. Fish: do something amazing."
Fish leapt out of the water—as high as Bear's knees.
"Meh," said Bear. "That wasn't very high. Nobody would want to see 'Bear and the not-very-high-jumping fish' on Broadway."
Fish leapt out of the water again—as high as Bear's chest.
"Better," said Bear, "but still not very impressive. Nobody would want to see 'Bear and the somewhat-high-jumping-fish' on Broadway."
Fish leapt out of the water again—as high as Bear's nose.
And before Fish could fall back into the water, Bear opened his mouth and swallowed Fish whole.
"It was a silly idea to take a fish on Broadway, anyway," he said.
Annaleise Byrd is an aspiring children's author who talks all things bookish at The Byrd and the Bookworms.
Science Report Following the Crash of Bear’s Boat on Fish’s Island
Prior Knowledge: Bear is an idiot. Who else would sail their boat directly into a storm?
Aim: Build an aeroplane to fly Bear off island.
Prediction: Bear will weigh us down unless we can create enough lift.
Observation: Searched the island and could not locate pieces to make an engine or wings. Bear laughed at me.
Result: Unsuccessful. Wrong pieces.
Aim: Build a raft using bamboo and parts from the wreckage from Bear’s boat.
Prediction: Bear will weigh us down and probably sink the raft.
Observation: Located bamboo and a sharp rock. Successfully cut down bamboo into raft size pieces. Used rope from the boat to tie the bamboo together. Raft looks good.
Result: Unsuccessful. Bear too heavy.
Prediction: I am a fish. I can swim. I will get off the island in no time.
Observation: Bear cried when I said my plan, but then he walked with me to the shore.
Result: Unsuccessful. Couldn’t leave Bear behind.
Sophia is a multi-tasking ninja by day and an author in the early hours of the morning. She has one published book (so far) with 3 more on the way in 2019.
Follow Sophia on Instagram @sophia_evans_author or Facebook @SophiaEvansAuthor for updates, written words and random thoughts.
Justine wrote and illustrated her first picture books for Children's Book Week when she was in primary school, and she's been writing and drawing ever since. Justine lives in Brisbane near a lovely creek where you will often find her communing with nature. Justine's picture books express her keen observation of life and her delight in understanding who and what and where and when and how and why! While her creative interests stretch far and wide, melding words and pictures into a story has Justine captivated.
Meet the Publishers at Book Links StoryArts Brisbane Festival 19-20 October 2019.
Join TOP publishers, authors and illustrators. Pitch to a publisher or a literary agent. Learn how to write and illustrate a children’s book. #BSAB19 festival presented by Book Links Brisbane.
#BSAB19 offers quality, affordable workshops and master classes and the opportunity to obtain face-face feedback on pitches, manuscripts and portfolios. Learn from key panel sessions with editors, agents, authors and illustrators including focused sessions with book creators.
BOOK one-on-one feedback with publishers Clair Hume (Affirm Press), Susannah Chambers (Allen & Unwin), Rowena Beresford (Yellow Brick Books), Emily Lighezzolo (Wombat Books, Rhiza Edge), Sarah Davis (Walker Books) or literary agent, Justine Barker (Mayfair Literary Agency)
All pitch sessions are filling up fast! I’m already booked in! I can’t wait to pitch to my chosen publisher.
Go to the page … Scroll down to choose your publisher or agent …
Feedback sessions for writers and illustrators can be booked separately.
MEET publishers Allen & Unwin, Affirm Books, Wombat Books, Yellow Brick Books and MORE.
MEET authors: Lisa Shanahan, Frané Lessac, Mark Greenwood
MEET illustrators: Sarah Davis and Heath McKenzie
Check the FULL program here on the Book Links website. The registration desk opens at 8am outside Auditorium 2, Brisbane State Library. Tickets include morning tea and lunch on Saturday only.
$95 members (Book Links and CBCA Qld Branch members)
Fierce, Funny, True: The Art of Writing for Children
Where do captivating ideas for children’s books really come from?
What does it take to write a novel that lingers and lasts?
Join award-winning writer Lisa Shanahan for an engaging and interactive writing workshop. Explore the essential narrative requirements for writing junior novels and middle grade fiction, including the key differences. Discover how to create convincing, believable characters and how to develop a strong, dynamic voice. Study the important fundamentals of structure, setting, plot, dialogue and emotional resonance.
Participant requirements: Bring your favourite children’s book
Limited spaces available. $60 – $90
Full day festival with panels and break-out sessions.
- Saturday 20 October, 2019 – $95 (members) $125 (non-members)
Day Program includes morning tea and lunch.
- Saturday 20 October, 2019 – $70 (members) $100 (non-members)
Editor and Agent Feedback (15 minutes each).
- Sunday 21 October, 2019 – $60 (members) $90 (non-members).
Full day masterclass. Meals not provided.
- Sunday 21 October, 2019 – $80 (members) $110 (non-members)
Editor and Agent Feedback (20 minutes each).
State Library of Queensland
South Brisbane, Qld 4101
Contact Details: Jenny Stubbs email@example.com MOB 0409 266 78
Karen Tyrrell author won 3 awards, 4 grants, 3 sponsorships and a mentorship from Society of Editors QLD.. Karen’s kids books, Bailey Beats the Blah and STOP the Bully, are endorsed by Kids Helpline. Harry Helps Grandpa Remember won a RADF grant and is endorsed by Alzheimer’s Australia.. Recently, Karen won an Arts Queensland grant for picture book, Ready Set Discover Logan.
I attended the 'Write a Picture Book for Charity' workshop with Library for All and Michelle Worthington in March 2019. Participants were given fantastic writing advice and prompts, and by the end of the day I had written a story I was happy to donate. It was an idea that had already been percolating, but I just hadn't taken the time to write it yet. I'm looking forward to seeing my words brought to life by an illustrator and seeing my name in print. Helping such a worthwhile cause is the cherry on top!
Annaleise Byrd is an aspiring children's author who talks all things bookish at The Byrd and the Bookworms.
This particular journey began with a visit to our WriteLinks group by Lara Cain Gray from Library for All as our guest speaker. She presented our group with a new challenge to write picture books for children living in Third World nations- in this case Papua New Guinea. This challenge sparked some historical memories for me. My father-in-law Pat Hawes was one of the pioneers of PNG aviation. I had also visited in Port Moresby in 1960s. So I remembered a country of sunshine, blue seas, tropical jungles and little children diving into fast flowing rivers.
My manuscript Kate’s Kite had been sitting in my computer for some time. I gave it a polishing edit and sent it off one Monday morning to Library for All. That afternoon it was accepted. An amazing boost to my ego after many rejections from other publishers.
Kate’s Kite has now been published and sent to PNG schools in printed and ebook form. Copies can be downloaded through their free digital library for Android devices from Google Play store.
My second picture book is Look! Can you see? It was created from my love of trees and birds. The illustrations by Romulo Reyes lll capture the colourful nature of the environment.
I would like to encourage other writers to support Library for All by donating the copyright of their story to this not for profit organization. Their web site libraryforall.org.au Lara’s email is firstname.lastname@example.org
My chapter book The Happy Letter has also been accepted and will be published soon. For me it’s been an exciting new journey and one I am pleased to contribute to.
She is currently writing her life story. Looking back she wonders how she ever fitted it all in as well as mothering four daughters and a bevy of grandchildren while her husband worked 24/7.
Photograph by Special Memories Photography.
I was first introduced to Library For All when Lara came to present at a WriteLinks meeting in October 2018. She offered us the chance to donate stories to be published to help the Papua New Guinea teachers and students with learning reading skills.
I went home that night and wrote three stories especially for the charity, slept on them and then edited before sending them to Lara. With major excitement, I received notice in the week of my birthday that the three stories would be accepted!! From there the writing bug grew. I continue writing for Library For All with new ideas that just keep coming.
Lara and the team are very helpful and supportive. My writing addiction has increased with each new contract. I am excited to now be signed for 19 stories!! I have thoroughly enjoyed working with Library For All as I get to use my hobby of writing combined with my teaching background to produce quality materials to assist a charity deliver literacy resources to other countries in both printed and digital formats.
Since working with Library For All I have championed their cause wherever I go by spreading the word for the Library For All digital e-library app. As it is free for anyone in the world to download, I have let as many teachers and parents know; as who doesn't love free stuff especially when it's educational!? The app can be used for in class learning through guided and silent reading and it can be used at home for home learning, partner reading with siblings or simply on holidays when you can't carry library books with you, you'll have over 200 at your fingertips.
I am extremely excited and proud to be a published author, especially for a great cause. I have read my books to kids and have first hand feedback through their smiles and laughter that they really enjoy them. I can highly recommend for any authors or illustrators to get in contact with the Library For All team to donate their work, as you know it will make a positive difference in the lives of children around the world.
Books below by KR Clarry.
I’ve been writing for Library for All since October 2018, and love being one of their authors. Every time I see one of their posts on Instagram, showing the books they’re sending out to PNG, I get a happy little feeling - some of my books might be in there. I’m helping someone to read, be literate. And the more they expand, the happier I am to be part of something so big!
Plus, Greg and the Egg was my first children’s book, with many more on the way now, including my first board book and a pair of non-fiction pieces for a Disaster series focussing on education on fire, earthquakes, floods and volcanoes.
Seeing my words in print illustrated by a local artist from PNG gave me the confidence to launch into my writing.
You can read more about Jo Seysener at Four Quills
Mirror stories reflected, enabling children to see themselves in the story. And windows allowed kids to learn and see through to other parts of the world, both being relatable".
Big Sister Blog